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	<title>Comments on: Airbeam Development, 5.5 psi</title>
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		<title>By: K7AAY</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jan 2010 23:09:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Grammar gremlins suggest these changes to
http://jpaerospace.com/blog/2009/07/27/airbeam-development-55-psi/

Expectation were high for big rib test.

Suggest adding the missing article of speech:

Expectation were high for the big rib test.

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What was that all about.

Suggest change to read:

What was that all about?

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A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, we were done for the night.

Suggest change to:

A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, so we were done for the night.
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The next day, Saturday we put the beam through it’s paces.

Suggest change [color=#FF04000]it&#039;s[/color] to its

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The next day out of shear frustration we cleared the day and decided to fix this problem.

Suggest change [color=#FF04000]shear[/color] to sheer


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The result was light ribbon loop around the beam, bit NOT attached in anyway to the beam. Ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.

Suggest change to:

The result was light ribbon loops around the beam, but NOT attached in anyway to the beam; ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.

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Many thanks for doing the work and keeping the dream in the air!</description>
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<p>Expectation were high for big rib test.</p>
<p>Suggest adding the missing article of speech:</p>
<p>Expectation were high for the big rib test.</p>
<p>-</p>
<p>What was that all about.</p>
<p>Suggest change to read:</p>
<p>What was that all about?</p>
<p>-</p>
<p>A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, we were done for the night.</p>
<p>Suggest change to:</p>
<p>A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, so we were done for the night.<br />
-</p>
<p>The next day, Saturday we put the beam through it’s paces.</p>
<p>Suggest change [color=#FF04000]it&#8217;s[/color] to its</p>
<p>-</p>
<p>The next day out of shear frustration we cleared the day and decided to fix this problem.</p>
<p>Suggest change [color=#FF04000]shear[/color] to sheer</p>
<p>-</p>
<p>The result was light ribbon loop around the beam, bit NOT attached in anyway to the beam. Ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.</p>
<p>Suggest change to:</p>
<p>The result was light ribbon loops around the beam, but NOT attached in anyway to the beam; ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.</p>
<p>-</p>
<p>Many thanks for doing the work and keeping the dream in the air!</p>
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